Nora was stuffing the picnic basket and filled it up with salami, bread rolls, 2 big packets of chips for the family, juice boxes for everyone, and some lollies for a snack on the way. When she was finished packing the basket, she put it in the boot of the car. Then she went back inside to get her jacket and go to the toilet. She heard the car start, but she had to go, she was busting! There were no other options. When she finished she came out to get in the car, but it wasn't there!
There were no cars in sight, every car from her street has disappeared! She ran down her street and tried to find someone to help her. Then she sprinted back to the house to get the food because she thought she might get hungry. She wondered if her parents may have started going to the carnival? But the carnival was ages away, so she would have to try and walk.
She started walking down the scary streets of emptiness. She walked past her friend's house, her friend's name was Emma Emma was very tall, as tall as a giraffe. She had hair that dragged down to her ankles. Nora saw something move, so she slowly crept up the driveway and saw her friend sitting on the couch looking scared. Emma was going to the carnival too, so they walked to the carnival together, in hope that they would find their parents. In the end they made it to the carnival and found their parents and realised they just accidentally left without her and lived happily ever after. Nora felt relieved and kind of angry that her parents would forget her. She vowed that she would never trust her parents again.
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I love the way you write Jesse, it is so clear and vivid. Some of the images you create are quite frightening. Remember to check punctuation and add a personal reflection. Keep up the great work.
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