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Wednesday 10 June 2020

snippet of writing

My family and i are going for a holiday to New Zealand. We are leaving in 20 minutes ``get your stuff ready we are leaving in 15 minutes´´ screamed mum. ``if your not ready you´re not coming so get ready´´ dad sead  in a angry voice. 



this just a little bit out of my narrative writing so it is not finished.
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous10 June 2020 at 10:33

    Hello Jesse
    I loved how you ues your speach marks.
    and I like how you said this is just a little bit of your writing.
    when you ues I remember to make it a capital letter.

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