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Tuesday 26 May 2020

Mary

This is my blog post i made on Mary.

4 comments:

  1. Wow Jesse your facts are amazing you have done such a good job I really like all your facts text time you could make shore that you use capital letters and you could write a little bit more about what you did and a W.A.L.T good job.

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  2. I loved how you took time and drawed Mary it is so cool and colourful.
    I loved how you have so many facts about Mary I enjoyed reading them.
    I think next time you could ues a capital letter for Mary.

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  3. Hi Jesse,

    I really like how you have added in your own image of Mary. It looks like it took you some time as there is a lot of detail in it. Was it hard to make?

    In your facts you have listed them in bullet points (which is awesome) though it looks like one of your facts has been spread over 2. Is that meant to be like that?

    What did you learn about Mary? I never knew that her parents were saints too!

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  4. hi jesse
    I love the colours that you uesed for mary.
    I also like all of the facts you put in there.
    maby next time you colud ues more punctuation in your text

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